Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Survival

Author's note: This is my predicting piece, I tried to work on AB transitions. Also I worked more on my body paragraphs like more support.

People quickly try to put their cold blistering hands in to the rock hard soil to dig down dip in the Earth’s ground for a hole 6 feet deep. A young 16 year old girl, Lina taken away from home, put to work with her mother and brother but her father sent to prison. While she is in the cart of a train to depart from her home town she meets a boy Andrius were she started to really like him. This happened in the book Between Shades of Gray by Ruta Sepety. I believe that in the end of this book Lina will have to work for years  and eventually her family and her will be let free in America and Lina will meet up with Andrius. Her survival will be because of her honor and love of her family.

The only thing that is keeping Lina alive is her family and her determination of surviving and going to live her life normally again. Every day she thinks of her father and tries to find a way to send something to him messaging that she is still alive. Through the drawings she makes of what she sees,  she sends them to the prison trying to let him know they are alright. Her only motivation she tells her self is “I will survive.” Every day would get harder and she would still be thinking of father and how she will see Andrius again.


Both Lina and Andrius loved each other, and right before she had to leave to work somewhere new Andrius gave a book to Lina the same one that she had earlier but ruined because it was used for smoking. Right after she got the book in her hand she had to leave and Andruis said to her “I’ll see you.”  It ran through her head a million times,  she knew she couldn’t wait to see his face.  Therefore she began to read the book even though it was Russian. Some pages Andrius would write things that made her wish she would be with him like “I am thinking of you, are you thinking of me?” Many people have been separated from who they loved and were put through torture like the holocaust and to come through just to fight for their own life.

 A girl, Ellie a little younger then Lina had to go through the holocaust which was just kind of like what Lina had to go through. Ellie liked a boy from school but he wasn’t Jewish so he wasn’t taken away from his home.  Once Ellie had to start to work and was separated from her father and brother she started to think that she had to survive because she wanted to get back with her family and wanted to see her crush again. These two characters remind me of each other because they both had to go through the same thing which was some bossing them around and had the fear of dying. The two girls both had the same attitude which was to survive and live the rest of their life with their family.


Overall I think that since Ellie had to go through almost the same thing and she survived so Lina will survive too. Along with that Lina’s family should survive too because Lina would do almost anything to save them. Also I think that Andrius will find Lina too because they were truly in love and he had access to send her letters and pictures. 

Monday, December 3, 2012

He Didn't Leave


Author's Note: This was my prediction for the story Thank You Ma'am. 


After the woman shut the door on  Rodger, instead of them never seeing each other again, he stayed outside of her house because he didn’t want to go home to his parents yelling at him or being alone. Therefore from then on he started to visit her more often, and they became closer it was like she was his mother. The reason I say this is because it seems like he didn’t have a very good home life, it seemed like his parents were never home but if they were it seemed like they would yell at him for not having a job so he could pay for himself. Also I think that he would hang around Mrs. Jones because she had a big impact on him changing his attitude so he enjoys to be around someone that trusts him.