Old Computers

Author's note: My group decided to write about computers and I did not know what to write so if you have any tips leave a comment.     

If you look at the computers when they first discovered, they look a lot different from now. The first one that was first made was huge it was a whole room, but the ones that we have now they are very small compared to the old ones. Even though about everything has improved or changed since the original product was made. Although the computer might have been the biggest change since the size, and even the material of how it works.

My Bad

Authors note: I could not remember any good vacations that I had so I decided to make one that was not real. Comment please.

“Alright we have 15 minutes, till we leave,” said my mom while she was shutting her suitcase, even though it wouldn’t shut. I walked away to make sure that I had everything. I zipped my up right away, and it was over flowing, a lot but it wasn’t even close to my moms. I returned to my kitchen where my mom was, her suit case was so big it looked like it was going to burst out and make everything fly everywhere. The taxi should be here but it isn’t then we looked at the clock and it was only 2:00 A.M. that meant that we had 2 more hours we were all tired and cranky.

About me

Authors note: In our writing circle we said that we wanted to write a poem, with our letters of our name and try to make it describe us.



 

Athletic

Marvelous

Astounding

Noteworthy

Determined  

Adventurous

Goal

Authors note: We wanted to write about sports, and I wasn't sure what to write about so give me feed back.

“You can shoot when I blow my whistle.” Said the referee as I set the soccer ball on the dot. I could see that my teammates wanted me to score. This was for all the marbles, if I make it we won the nationals and get 1^st place. As he blows the whistle I started to approach the ball. My heart was racing, and I feel people staring at me. Finally I was starting to get to the ball and I kicked as hard as I could. Next thing I knew the goalie dived to the right, even though I shot the ball on the left. It hit the back of the net and I turned around at started to run back words to my teammates. They all started to jump up in the air because they were so excited. That was probably the best time in my life.

Snow Storm

Author's note: In my writing circle we were thinking about the snow, and then we thought how we wanted it to come sooner. 




“Creek creek,” goes the stairs as I walk down them. While I was just woke up, I look outside and there is was so much snow on the ground it was as tall as the Eiffel tower! Even the snowflakes were going down, really fast.  I thought I should start getting ready for school because I don’t want to be late. When I walk in my kitchen, my sister and my mom were starring at the TV. I was confused for awhile, so then I asked why you are starring at the TV. Right away my sister answered me, and said we have no school! I was so excited, I wanted to go sledding right away so then I got ready and then me and my sister went, on the hill right next to our house. It was so amusing, I wish we could, we would get another one sometime soon! 

Christmas Cookies

Authors note: I wrote this for my writing circle, and I did not think it was that good so comment for some tips.    

 It is the night of Christmas and we are ready to make some cookies for Santa. We are making my favorite kind, sugar cookies with green frosting and sprinkles. My sister and I are really good at cooking so these will be good. We started to make the batter and we preheated the oven. By the time I started to beat it, it looked really well. The oven beeped really loud, but it meant that the oven was preheated and we were ready to bake them. We didn’t know what to do in the mean time, so we looked through our frig, and saw chocolate chip cookie dough. Of course were going to eat it! After we keep shoving it down our throats it was all gone, and the oven went off again. They were done! After that I got big glass a milk, and we set it all up. Then off we went to go to bed.